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Reflective Evaluation

(This piece appears in both my online blog, the repository for all my work, and (to fulfil the assessment submission requirements) in the G drive folder ‘Reflective presentation or evaluation’)

There would be precious little point in doing a module if it were easy so by that measure this one has been notably worthwhile.  It brought out some of my less appealing personal traits such as a tendency to contrarianism and stimulated those qualities which I modestly term my ‘potential’.

I had difficulty integrating some of the core concepts of ‘othering’ into my world view but did manage to grasp many of the subtleties which arise from them.  I engaged willingly with the theoretical aspects of photographic practice which the course raised and made a good attempt at incorporating them into my own work.  Where that isn’t immediately apparent I do believe that I was at least aware of the potential ramifications.

The greater value of the course was, to me, the way that I was required to interact with my subjects both visually and personally.  I have become more confidant in acknowledging myself as a photographer with fairly clear purpose and intent rather than someone who stumbles around taking pictures.  Although I certainly do that as well.

The series I made of the Anglican Bishops was probably the most rewarding and could have been an ongoing project were it not for pressure of time and recent social restrictions.  It called upon a variety of skills – organisational, photographic and personal – along with tenacity and patience.  I am not noted for the latter qualities so this was an opportunity to develop within a supportive framework.

So much for the good stuff.  There is considerable scope for improvement in a number of areas including:

  • Documenting reading and looking. I spend a huge amount of time reading about and looking at photography from a range of sources but utterly fail to record the details and as a consequence cannot refer to this in my blog.
  • Examining my shoes. I spend far too much time fretting about the details when I should be actually taking photographs, not trying to finesse them before they even exist.
  • Time management. I must be more organised, setting aside planned work time and sticking to it.  One might think that recently enforced measures would offer just such an opportunity but I have failed to make the best use of them.
  • What do think of my work? There is a school of thought which holds that the only real opinion which matters is your own but that probably shouldn’t mean not seeking any feedback at all.  Importantly, I should recognise that I don’t need to respond or justify beyond a simple ‘thank you’

There we are.  Challenge and reward in satisfying proportions.

SO Part Five – Tutor Report and Response

Andy Webster - 516057 - Photography 2 The Self and the Other - Assignment 5


It’s a relief to be nudged away from a line of photographic enquiry which in truth I felt was going nowhere.  The West Bay idea really was an attempt to make the ‘right kind’ of work but whether it would have been right or not I had little enthusiasm for it.  I daresay I could have extracted something presentable in the end but however it was received elsewhere, in my head it would have been thin and meaningless.

In the report is a link to some work by a former student which I found interesting – here are a couple of pictures to talk about:

Nigel J Haworth Counting Seeds (n.d.)

Nigel J Haworth Counting Seeds (n.d.)

Haworth has used a simple, but pleasingly arranged and lit table-top approach to  “represent different aspects concerned with the day-to-day life of hoping to start a family while struggling against the winding down of the biological clock”  []

Juan Sánchez Cotán - Wikipedia


Juan Sanchez Cotan Quince, Cabbage, Melon and Cucumber, 1602

Hanging comestibles up with string was a contemporary method of preservation.  The items were prevented from touching a surface which might lead to decomposition and the air was allowed to circulate all around.  Lots of foodstuffs were stored in this way, most notably cured meats, and chorizo is still produced with string attached today.

Haworth has alternated the quotidian with the emotionally charged in his photographs and there is an element of intrigue introduced by the origami birds.  Allegory, visual metaphor, symbol, analogy, all devices which might be usefully employed in the construction of a photograph with meaning.

As a result of this report and tutorial I will consider alternative approaches to Assignment Five and my process can be followed from around here 

Avedon and the White Background

I spent a bit of time looking into this, prompted by a link sent by my tutor which dealt with the approach taken by someone called Liam at The Photography Project.  He and an assistant used a 5×4 camera in a studio setting with a couple of flash units to imitate the Avedon technique.  Rather than using actual 5×4 film they decided to work with printing paper, developed in the normal way as a negative then scanned and printed by inkjet.

They used one flash for the background, to burn it out as white and the other to light the figure in Rembrandt-style, placed 45 degrees above and the same to the side to give the telltale patch of light under the lee-side eye.

The lighting approach is pretty straightforward but the effect has a bit more to it; Avedon’s subjects were starkly lit front-on and appeared without any context.  They were surrounded only by detail-less white.  Nothing to inform or distract the viewer, no suggestions about the place where the picture was taken or the circumstances which surrounded it.

That just leaves the subject, fully exposed for scrutiny and looking (for the most part) directly at the viewer.  These were the people Avedon encountered during the expedition he embarked upon in search of subjects for the commissioned work “In the American West”.  It took five years to do the photography and along with with a team of assistants he went through 17,000 sheets of 10×8 film.  That’s ten sheets a day, every single day, for five years.  I don’t know how many days he actually shot for but it’s still a lot of film.

I’ve worked out of a series of no’s. No to exquisite light, no to apparent compositions, no to the seduction of poses or narrative. And all these no’s force me to the “yes.” I have a white background. I have the person I’m interested in and the thing that happens between us. – Richard Avedon 1994
Avedon at work, photographer unknown



Art-UK, a charity which is concerned with the promotion and recording of artworks, were looking for volunteer photographers, so I joined up.  I was given a spreadsheet of 54 sculptures and monuments of artistic merit to photograph, located within a couple of hours drive of my home.

There were few technical challenges, mainly dealing with reflections on shiny surfaces and avoiding too much unwanted public presence in the background.  The weather was an issue, not just rain but bright sunlight, which made some pieces too contrasty – reflectors were a help here.  I never used any artificial light.

There were a variety of difficulties in actually making the pictures – getting a clear view without distracting backgrounds for example.  Here a limited depth of field was helpful and I used 58mm and 85mm lenses to achieve this, at apertures around 4.5 or 5.6

Sometimes the objects were quite far away from the nearest vantage point and a longer focal length was needed.  In the case of decorative embellishments on Torquay Pavilion I used a 200mm lens with a 2x converter.  These were legacy Olympus optics but they produced surprisingly good results.  The biggest problem was keeping the unwieldy combination steady enough to avoid vibration.

ArtUK needed detailed and accurate records to be kept in the worksheet they provided, along with folders of both RAW and JPG files all named according to their protocol.  I spent a lot of time in Adobe RAW’s renaming dialog and also a useful little utility which copied a batch of filenames and extensions for pasting in the worksheet.

Subsistence and expenses were covered so further records were required in order to reclaim the outlay.  Some forward planning and coordination was necessary in order to optimise the travel legs.

The coordinator Dr Anthony McIntosh was very pleased with my efforts and the work will be available on the Art UK website shortly.  I retain the rights but grant a limited licence to ArtUK, who undertake to credit any picture wherever it appears.

This was a useful charitable interaction; even though it was unpaid, it was a real job with client-style requirements and reasonable technical standards expected.


LO5 evidencing

LO5 increasing autonomy and a developing personal voice, and exercise your communication skills confidently and interact effectively within a learning group


Evidence LO5A  Interacting within a learning group.  I regularly visit the OCA Photography forum although I am more of a lurker than a contributor.  Checking my stats from the ‘user data download’ facility I note that I have spent 635 minutes perusing the forums since November 2019 or just over ten and a half hours.  I haven’t made a blog entry about this as it is just stats but there is a page to look at here

Evidence LO5B  I was a volunteer photographer for ArtUK, recording over fifty sculptures in the southwest for their website.  It was an interaction with a charity, unpaid but rewarding in other ways as it required communication skills and effective interactions  see here

LO4 evidencing

LO4 manage learning resources, conduct self-directed contextual and visual research, and be able to appraise your progress with increasing confidence


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Evidence LO4A These days the learning resources are almost all online and although I do enjoy the big print I find that the restrictions imposed by the pandemic aren’t too restricting. I am content to view on screen. Sometimes it’s difficult to control. as I explained there, but overall the availability of research material is a big benefit.

Evidence LO4B  is a coursework exercise where I settled on a particular photograph to analyse


LO3 evidencing

LO3 explore and realise a range of ideas and creative starting points, and exercise judgement in the production of visual material


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Evidence LO3A  In Exercise 1.1 I wrote about the internal discussion I had over doing stranger portraits and  I note a number of possible starting points   (read from the red text onwards).  The decision wasn’t really made beforehand – it arose as a result of my responses to the people at the race, so it evolved during the exercise.

Evidence LO3B  is a set of exercises completed through coursework.  In each case I have written about how I have considered and refined different visual approaches to produce a piece of finished work.



And here

I would claim that every exercise which ended up as a set of pictures required a good deal of contemplation and judgement.  Things often didn’t end up as I intended, but at least they did end.